Here are Amy's notes from her review yesterday of the work on your blogs:
• "Owl Studio":--> animation and colors are good, buildings too. I need the script...
• "ANP Studios":--> loved the last sentence! If we can add something like "to find out how you can help in your area go to "http://www.cityofhope.org/fundraising-offices" and find the office near you."
• "BluBottle Studios"--> great info in the dialog but need some where in it to say how we feel COH's impact all over and how people can help
• "Pencil Perfect--> Dialog is good, a little short, can we add somewhere "how you can help" info?
• Yo Yo Studio --> loved the whole dialog, especially talking about how we can help, is there somewhere to add that all COH's research can be felt in your area? Also the story pictures are good, love the dog paws...
Please make sure to respond to Amy with your revisions before next class.
good luck!
Chris
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